Ah... how much we love the ones we can't have, even when we endure torture by their touch. Or, in our case, the lack there of. I love how I can understand your poetry, having been in the exact situations myself. It's a relief to know someone out here really and truly understands my pain.

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Soylent Green is PEOPLE!

Your imagery here is vivid and attention-getting...especially when it comes to images such as stabbing razors. You think more of razors as entities that only have the power or capacity to slit things, rather than dig deep enough to stab. Interesting that even in that line, you brought the pain and masochistic side out all the more. And even while being attention-getting in terms of vivid, it's great how you turn halfway typical, almost "well-duh" images and put them together with a certain edge. Also with the rhyme - the rhyme scheme makes the poem so damn sing-songy, it almost does show the willingness and your need for whatever pain the guy dealt to you. You reveled in it, so it seems, when others might have used darker, free/blank verse in order to portray it if they felt otherwise.

Definitely an interesting approach to a general topic. Nice work.

i like this alot...i read ALOT of poetry here a only comment on what i like which isn't that much so you did good

Well thank you! That's so nice of you

That is quite the poem
comments isnt my strong side, so i'll just

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Just go off thinking I said something smart..

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Wow, thank you! I'm glad that SOMETHING good came of my crash-test relationship with him, haha